Commercial using movie footage

Have to make a 30 second commercial using movie footage. Any comments or suggestions to make it better would be greatly appreciated. I chose to make a sewing machine commercial using Spiderman. Originally I was going to have Spiderman get a cut in his suit and take it home to see the hole and then he has to sew it up. But I couldn't find the footage I needed for it so I switched to this one. Not sure whether to use it or start over and make a travel commercial with Pirates of the Caribbean .